Prompt Post

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 Welcome to Round One of the FFXV Kink Meme!

CLOSED for prompts | OPEN for fills

Please have a look at the extended rules here.

The important rules in short:

• Post anonymously.
• Negative comments on other people's prompts (kink-shaming, pairing-bashing etc.) and personal attacks of any kind will not be tolerated.
• One prompt per comment. Warnings for common triggers and squicks are encouraged, but not required.
• Prompts should follow the format: Character/character, prompt.
• Keep prompts to a reasonable length; prompts should not be detailed story outlines.
• Fills should have the word "Fill:" at the start of the subject line.
• Otherwise please avoid changing the subject line.

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Prompt, write, draw, comment, and most importantly have fun!

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UPDATE 12/30/16: I'm looking for some help! Details here.  (I'm always looking for more pinners; this is an open invitation.)

I've added/clarified some rules to make life easier to my pinners. Please refrain from changing the subject lines except when filling or updating a fill. It makes it easier for us to keep track of what we've already looked at. Thank you so much!

UPDATE 1/28/17: We've opened up a Drabble Tree post! Go check it out. 

UPDATE 2/21/2017: ROUND ONE IS CLOSED FOR PROMPTS. Please feel free to continue posting fills. Round Two will open for prompts and fills on 3/1/2017.

 

Comments

Re: Fill: 4/10 Ardyn/Prompto (eventual Noctis/Prompto) Sexual Harassment/Non-con

[(Anonymous)]

“Yup.” Prompto sat up, with a small nod. “I'm the worst.”

Ha! Bless you, Prompto. You can't be the worst when Ardyn's around.

To be honest, reading part three was a bit disconcerting, because I love the fic you took inspiration from and have read it multiple times. It's good that you credited your inspiration, but the scene felt a little too similar in structure (Ardyn kisses Prompto while he's distracted, everyone else gets to their feet at once, Noctis has his sword at Ardyn's throat, Gladio is looming threateningly next to him etc.), and phrasing. For example:

“My apologies.” Ardyn crooned, his hands up in a show of surrender as he steps away from Noctis’ sword. “I believe I allowed the wine and fine evening to cloud my better judgement.”
“My apologies.” Ardyn crooned, his hands up in a show of surrender. He deftly backed away from Noctis’ sword. “I believe I allowed the wine and lovely evening to cloud my judgment.”

In lines like this, it felt like you'd just taken that scene and altered a few words, rather than taking the concept of Ardyn kissing Prompto outside the caravan and making your own thing out of it. It creates a strange, offputting feeling in readers who are familiar with the other fic - the sense that we've seen this all before, but very slightly different - and it's a shame, because when you do your own thing it's great! If you're planning to post this fic to AO3 once it's finished, I'd suggest rewriting that scene. I'd love to see your own take on Ardyn kissing Prompto in front of the others. There's definitely room for multiple fics dealing with that concept. (To be honest, it's a concept I can't get enough of.)

After that strange moment, though, this section reminded me of why I love this fill. This whole part is great. I love Ardyn creepily licking Prompto's ear, and Ignis and Gladio's intense dislike and distrust. And Noctis resting in Prompto's lap is adorable. I'm excited to read the rest of this!

Re: Fill: 4/10 Ardyn/Prompto (eventual Noctis/Prompto) Sexual Harassment/Non-con

[(Anonymous)]

Thanks for your feedback. I'll actually get to writing it asap since I'm thinking about it. I feel like i used it as a bit of a crutch and planned to go back and tweak it more. Appreciate it!

Re: Fill: 4/10 Ardyn/Prompto (eventual Noctis/Prompto) Sexual Harassment/Non-con

[(Anonymous)]

I look forward to seeing what you come up with! Like I said, I'm enjoying this fill hugely (and I'd never have guessed you were relatively new to ficwriting); that bit just threw me a little.