"Well, you look like some kind of criminal." - Ouch. Cannot really disagree with the wary eye or assessment Noctis jumped to, but that had to sting.

A vague idea for a beginning, middle, and end…? Well, you’re in a much better position than I have ever been when it comes to the writing process, haha. I didn’t notice any spelling mistakes and I like how Noctis’ + Galdiolus’ instincts are nearing the surface. Jack is off the list, so I am curious as to what name Noctis will ultimately be comfortable with…
I wish you luck and hope you will find the time to finish this fill for the OP, yourself, and the ever present lurkers! :)