This is perfect. The last line is so powerful I held my breath. Was than hanged man, whose Prompto saw, Ardyn?
I love how Prompto made Ardyn realize that Ardyn can have him without any weird wagers, that Prompto likes him. And it was sweet how Prompto was listing things which Ardyn did to him! I also like how Prompto knows that Ardyn wants to punish villagers for something they didn't do and tries to stop him from doing so.
The lemon scene was perfect. I loved the description of Prompto falling and seeing stars, and I'm wondering if voices he heard are important?
Thank you so much for writing this story. I'm looking forward for every next chapter!
Re: Fill: 6/? Re: Trickster God!Ardyn/Prompto
Date: 2017-09-20 06:30 pm (UTC)I love how Prompto made Ardyn realize that Ardyn can have him without any weird wagers, that Prompto likes him. And it was sweet how Prompto was listing things which Ardyn did to him! I also like how Prompto knows that Ardyn wants to punish villagers for something they didn't do and tries to stop him from doing so.
The lemon scene was perfect. I loved the description of Prompto falling and seeing stars, and I'm wondering if voices he heard are important?
Thank you so much for writing this story. I'm looking forward for every next chapter!