Anon, this is amazing *.* Both entertaining and down right sexy. Noct, you're going to kill your friends xD
If I can suggest something, I think you need to use their names some more. Like, in this sentence "(...)pulling just right as he thrust into him" I'm not sure if it's Gladio thrusting into Noct or the other way around ^^'
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Re: Fill 2/? Re: Noctis/Bros, Mindreading
Date: 2017-09-14 06:32 pm (UTC)If I can suggest something, I think you need to use their names some more. Like, in this sentence "(...)pulling just right as he thrust into him" I'm not sure if it's Gladio thrusting into Noct or the other way around ^^'