A!A you're crazy to think you didn't do this prompt justice. This was perfect in every way, you sell yourself far too short. Can't wait for the next chapter as well. Since this is sort of an emotional/psychological sort of story maybe you could work in Noctis feeling supremely guilty in the next part? Afterall, it was his fault for knocking Prompto off the train and leading to his capture--albeit not on purpose since he thought it was Ardyn and he was actually thinking he was protecting Prompto. It would be some great guilt, especially after Prompto remarks so many times in the game to him "you always have my back" in some of the battles they go into. I'm a sucker for emotional guilt!