I'm really digging how you're going about this so far! The gradual build-up is great in my opinion, and I also like that you included Noctis grieving over his losing his home and his father!
Poor Noct, his pain is only going to get worse T.T I agree with the other anon about Noctis angst being interesting to read--though I also like tons of hurt/comfort along with it haha. Also the beginning part with all the boys just teasing Noct and trying to get him to wake up was cute! :D
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Re: Fill - 4/?
Date: 2017-03-18 05:11 am (UTC)Poor Noct, his pain is only going to get worse T.T I agree with the other anon about Noctis angst being interesting to read--though I also like tons of hurt/comfort along with it haha. Also the beginning part with all the boys just teasing Noct and trying to get him to wake up was cute! :D